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All I Ever Wanted Is in You
All I ever wanted is in you:
Love, laughter, a pillow for my fears.
I want to give and to be given to
So I might feel myself flow through the years
Alive in you, the wonder of my tears. |
Nicholas Gordon |
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Reader Comments |
good |
Name: kriistiinE | 2004-07-15 |
Very good poem but if u want people to believe that please make it longer..... thank u |
the poem |
Name: linda | 2004-09-17 |
the poem was alright but try to rhyme a little bit more
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great |
Name: anuhea | 2004-09-30 |
it was a great poem that i thought was pretty good, get to me as soon as u get this !!! |
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