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After You're Gone Comments
Reader Comments |
very good |
Name: r. standfield | 2005-03-20 |
very good
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Too true |
Name: SOPHIE | 2005-04-02 |
this is sooo sad makes me think of my late husband |
good |
Name: hooeva | 2005-04-25 |
thats sound funny for me...this not make me sound lost its make me laugh |
sorry it wasent good |
Name: latina | 2005-06-19 |
i think it was bad sorry + |
it was ok could have been better |
Name: tricia | 2005-08-24 |
i like it in someways but it wasnt so sad i still love ur other peoms but not this one im so sorry
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cool |
Name: lau | 2005-09-16 |
good write.. |
boring |
Name: maggie | 2005-10-14 |
i agree with the little boys its not decent enough soz :( |
not bad |
Name: gareth | 2005-10-24 |
not the best but this aint that bad :) |
So Sad but Good |
Name: Lockka | 2005-10-28 |
I like this poem so much...b/c i had once read this exact poem at my boyfriends funeral and nick took the words right out my mouth and everyone else's that was there and i thank him for writin a good poem b/c this poem...to me....says how i feel about him and how i miss him so :( so thank u nick again for writing |
BAD |
Name: person | 2005-10-29 |
yah sooo sorry but sude i agree with Kaleb that was kinda shitty |
very gud |
Name: vieir | 2006-08-08 |
it reminds me of my ex-girlfriend,dude,how can u cum up with such anys poem. |
Youre all wrong |
Name: Rachel | 2006-10-15 |
Every one of you who have dissed Nic's work are pathetic and stupid. Jessica: poems don't have to rhyme to be a poem. You are much younger than 13, more like 5. When I was five, poems where rhyming sentences, but then I grew up. Unlike you, and many others, I understand what poetry is really about. & Kaleb & all others who agreed with him, get a life. Do you really come on here just to diss others? It's really pathetic.
Nic, I reckon your poems are excellent. Keep up the good work. |
good |
Name: michael | 2006-10-25 |
man that was good, it makes me think of my ex. |
WICKEDD |
Name: lOLA | 2006-11-07 |
VERYGIOOD POEM
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sweet |
Name: Destiny | 2006-11-08 |
That was sweet, your very thoughtfull ! |
pretty good |
Name: jason | 2006-12-03 |
wow, wat you said there is excatly how i feel. |
write |
Name: k.l.l | 2007-01-10 |
you are everygood write when it come to peoms from what i know |
good one |
Name: mickeymouse | 2007-05-29 |
its a very nyce and sad poem i luv it! |
really good |
Name: chantelle | 2007-06-29 |
that really means a lot. it made me think of my mum, i may be 15 but that means alot to me |
good |
Name: devil | 2007-06-29 |
you people putting the peom down, you are so heartless. if you haven't lost a loved one then shut up coz you dont know how much that poem actually means. |
lost loved1 |
Name: erica | 2007-08-04 |
srry bout dat dude.....dis makes me think bout my last boyfriend i had n i loved him alot...... n his life has went on n i can neva get ova him cuz he ment alot 2 me |
was okay |
Name: natheerah | 2011-02-23 |
Give the a guy a break people. It is not that bad |
bad |
Name: Brianna Winebarger | 2010-05-11 |
I think this poem is bad and has no heart. |
love |
Name: anna stone | 2010-06-08 |
love is a big thing went it come to love you have to find the right oneif not it not gonna last forever you want sum thing that would last forever not a month |
difficult moments |
Name: houda | 2010-10-20 |
i want to thank you so much for the ability of discribing the real situation when losing a close person to us i this life.
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nice |
Name: eran | 2011-01-26 |
really very nice |
thats how i feel |
Name: Carl | 2009-05-24 |
that was good..its how i feel right now about this girl i might not see again |
Deep Nostalgic Memories |
Name: Lex | 2009-05-29 |
Nicholas,
Your poetry and specifically this poem is very heartfelt and invokes nostalgic memories. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
touchd |
Name: c.selvage | 2008-07-10 |
i needed this poem it was perfect kus mi girlfriend just leaft thank u sooo much
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im wit kaleb |
Name: bekki | 2008-07-10 |
i think kalebs rite.... im 13 and I write better poems than that...no offence tho....he he he... |
That is so sad |
Name: mau | 2008-08-06 |
I think all of us felt heart broken at least once in our lives and of course when the one we loved has gone our whole world turns upside down and we feel like we're gonna die because of pain. This is a so sad but nice and interesting poem. |
unpReDictable |
Name: jhOy | 2008-11-01 |
sO tRu.. i olreDy experienceD dat.. |
Very good |
Name: Devika | 2009-05-16 |
It makes me feel you have been through same phase which i m going right nw.... |
this is so sad and true at the same time |
Name: monica | 2008-04-18 |
this poem is da bomb but sad at the same time hopefully this never happens to no one |
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Name: Vhina | 2013-02-20 |
Was only able to read Sixth Grade from Cavewall Press. It's so wonderful, Lisa. Thank you for inniudlcg me. I look forward to reading your beautiful words. Pat |
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Name: Pipat | 2013-02-20 |
Voice, AGH! You've got all my sympathies with you now. But voice only comes when you're not trinyg; it's like "Don't think of elephants", It's so easy it's too hard. Or it's so hard it's too easy. Or something.I've found the best way is, to sweat your [***] off for years on thething until your frustration finally bursts into a big tantrum of swearing and hair-pulling so that you finally say AH FORGET IT and just dump your bleeding heart all over the page.Sounds dumb, but seriously. I did that and sent it to the Arts Council and then felt like I'd humiliated myself...but they gave me the grant, 15K. So it works.Not that I'd recommend it. I take pills now. |
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Name: Kenisha | 2016-07-22 |
I met Dennis up at the lodge when the Beach Boys were there. Just saw the Beach Boys play last summer here at a frie7d̵n;s house in Benedict Canyon. John Stamos was singing with Mike Love. Rest in peace Dennis.Luv xoLydia |
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