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Beautiful Dreamer

Name: Cecilia

2011-04-26

I see you in my mind
At night you walk in my wave lengths
I drink of your vibrations
Poisen to my heart
Slowly I begin to love you
I drempt of you last night
I saw her in my dream
I began to resent you
I asked for you to leave me
Yet your presence is always with me
Captivating my existance
I only see it through your eyes
All this world can give me
I only wanted you
But she stole your heart away
Now I am free from you.

loved it
Name: ashlee	2011-05-10
i loved ur poems they really touched my heart because one of these days i am going to fall in love and i want to feel the same way like these poems. :) keep up the great work

uummm...
Name: nikki	2006-02-11
i didn't like your poem that much...it didn't make sense and i don't think writing poems is your talent..i don't want to sound mean or anything...

Wonderful
Name: Kellie	2006-04-21
I think this poem is very wonderful and to be such a talented person you should continue writing poems. talents come in many different ways and you should not be afraid of what others think. Be strong and keep wise.

i like it and cried
Name: jenice	2006-05-25
im going through alot of stuff and ur poem knew exacaly how to put my feeling in one mond cuz my babys leaving me for 6 months and i dont know what to do with out him

Hardly
Name: Rachel	2006-10-15
Nikki, I hardly think your comment is correct. It's so far from the truth! This person has wrote so many beautiful poems that I have read! And you're telling her writing poems is not her talent? Do you even know what a poem is?

Loved It
Name: Rupam	2007-03-05
Nich ... Your writing gave me a new height of thinking ...... You must need to dissolve into the mass of the feelings to understand the interior depth of your poem ... Excellent food for thought .. Carry it on pal...

thank you
Name: puddles	2007-04-24
your poems mean the world to me my life is going to well at the moment but thru reading this poem its just lifted me up!!!

i understand
Name: MISSPRETTY	2011-03-17
your poem was inlighten people may not understand what ur try to say but sometimes you have to look past your words im a poet my self and your were so deep it kind of brought me to tears im going through alot rite now but your poem makes me feel a little better keep writing its so ur thing

its rocks
Name: lucky	2010-04-12
u realy knw hw 2 do ur things

I emphathysed
Name: tayabsgirl	2010-06-27
i litteraly cried reading ur poem and i can totaly relate to it......... wish love really didnt exsist if pain was all we're gonner gain......

Got it.......
Name: marshon anderson	2010-09-26
searching brought me back to this page. I read this poem for the second time and got so much more than before. This is deep and so true. But of course I have been drinking and feeling a little blue. Keep it up..... Got it now

It sumhow had a meaning
Name: Moratua shasha	2010-10-06
Keep on writting ur poems, they truly have a meaning. It's what we face each n evryday of our entire lives

awsome
Name: Pari	2010-11-02
its awsome

Absolutely Wonderful
Name: Tiffany	2011-01-31
You wrote this poem very well. I could just picture in my mind the person I am missing. Wonderful xx

Awwwww
Name: Girl	2009-06-15
Youi almost made me cry. This is a really beautiful poem. I also enjoy writing thing a long this line.

Corect
Name: jonathan	2009-08-26
never give up on your gift that God has given you because if you do he will be very mad at u and myte take the gift away

I did like it but...
Name: bailey	2009-12-27
Your poem was very insparational and all but,you could have used something with more feeling of what your talking about.I mean you probably realize what your writing about,Anyway I dont like being mean at all REALLY trust me.I LOVE YOU.CALL ME.

Good job
Name: ann	2010-03-11
i like your poem alot keep writting them

love
Name: barabus	2010-03-17
love is a curious thing that causes much pain bewilderment hades in the salt flats or rome love cannot conquer all love is futile and silly generally means give blood isnt love

Fantastic
Name: Qhama	2008-08-08
How did u do it?Your mom must be so so proud of you,i really dig it i Luv it.....

i like
Name: tractine	2009-01-06
sweety ur poem is very sweet and touchin nikki whoever she is dnt no wat she sayn she need to go and rite one it nice keep it up

That is so deep.
Name: Bob Evens	2009-03-11
I loved your peom. it makes me think about the one i love and the one i lost.

Thank you
Name: Annie Smith	2009-03-11
this is a wonderfull poem that i will never forget. It is just so beautifull! Thank You

Rock that poem
Name: Jude OBrian	2009-03-11
Rock on Dude or Dudet! this was asum. Its like ridin my bord down the escalator. Ride on!

love it
Name: keya	2009-03-18
just one word...dept...ur poem has dept...dont give up writing no matter wht pple say..cheers;)

love it
Name: lexi	2012-03-17
i luv ur poem ..its so sweet and sorwrow i actually gonna use that for my poetry project at school then it will be presented in front of millions of people ..which means that your poem will go worldwide!!! i luv ur poem once again and dont worry about wat everyone else says so wat if they dont lyk it but i do GREAT JOB !!! xoxoxox lexi :)

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Name: Ricki

2012-12-08

There is a book you can buy in either Barnes and Noble or Borders caleld the Writer's Market. It comes out every year and lists small-press publications as well as the more cosmopolitan ones (like the New Yorker). It will give you a rating and their criteria for submitting a poem. Some of the smaller presses look for new poets/writers depending on your category of poems. They also look for short stories. Good luck!

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