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I Wish that I Could Be with You Comments
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| Wonderful |
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| Name: Myra | 2005-05-09 |
| This is one of the best poems I've ever read. It's wonderful.Keep it up. |
| Awesome Poem |
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| Name: Brittany | 2005-05-29 |
| Your poem is great. You did a very good job. Keep up the good work! |
| PERFECT |
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| Name: Gloria | 2005-06-01 |
one of the best poems i've
ever read is this one KEEP IT UP |
| GR8 |
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| Name: big-moe | 2006-02-03 |
| woooooooooooooow!!! this one is great!!! ur poems r great!! keep it coming!! |
| alrighty |
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| Name: alexa | 2006-03-28 |
| yeah it was ok i guess i kinda didn't get it but watevers |
| dam.. |
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| Name: matt | 2006-04-03 |
| this poem says my words and my feelings... who ever wrote this. your very creative and this poem is one of the best i have ever read. |
| umm |
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| Name: Jess | 2006-10-18 |
| ya i like this pome its good |
| keep it up |
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| Name: babygirl | 2007-02-16 |
| I like this you know how to write a sad love poem for get jjjj because he's just mad because he can't fuck anybody but he's self |
| mind blowing |
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| Name: Rashna | 2007-09-07 |
i really like your poem.
it's simply mind blowing.
sorry if my english is bad.i'm from suriname and i usually speak dutch. |
| Makes me cry |
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| Name: Faheem Idris Paruk | 2007-09-25 |
| THis poem is so delightful. i love it to bits. If i counted the amount of tears i cried whilst reading this poem, i would have my own ocean full of tears. Such a gentle tender poem |
| AWESOME |
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| Name: Brittany Chambers | 2007-10-02 |
This is an awesome poem. Keep it up girl
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| this is a good one |
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| Name: shawn | 2007-11-04 |
| your others are sweet and kind and i think i like this one the best. there really isnt much to criticize and i think you did a great job here. jjjj or whatevr his or her name cud go fuck themselves cuz this one rocked. |
| nice |
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| Name: cute baby | 2010-06-21 |
| hey dont worry what "jjjj"says you did awesome i loved it keep it up or u'll always fail. |
| helps |
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| Name: Forrest | 2010-08-03 |
| this is wonderful you are doing wonders for my relationship with my wife. ty |
| I Love it |
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| Name: Hansa | 2010-08-17 |
| Your poem touch my heart |
| Greatly done |
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| Name: Ayo | 2009-06-28 |
| This touches the heart from deep inside. Keep it up!!!!! |
| AWESOME |
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| Name: lebanon butterfly | 2009-12-04 |
| very very very great and meaningful poem...just go on..:) |
| fabulous |
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| Name: suzen | 2010-01-07 |
| Mr Gordon , you are one of a person who knows how to pour out your feelings , this one really awesome , I wish I could be in touch with you to get more feelings ....... Keep it up, keep writting. |
| hey |
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| Name: anonymous | 2008-06-30 |
its very touching, ignore the comment below,
i think your poem is beautiful and strengthens the hearts of those separated lovers |
| Not bad |
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| Name: Sally | 2008-06-30 |
| It was ok, more feelings could b expressed. |
| fab. poem |
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| Name: Emily | 2008-08-25 |
| this poem is one the best I've read. I don't know why JJJJ didn't like it. good job keep it up |
| improved |
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| Name: lora | 2008-08-25 |
I think this would be better.=
I wish that I could be with you
And hold you in my arms,
Whisper all my love to you
And kiss away your tears.
I wish that I could take your fears
And kiss them all away
I wish that I could take your heart,
And make it love me.
I wish that my love could step inside
Your heart and stay awhile,
And all the rain between us could turn into
A rainbow in the sun.
And all my loneliness inside me
Could fade into the blue.
And we'd be together,
Just us two.
How I'd want to be with you right now,
But fate didn't let you to love me.
So we can't be together ,
But I will love you forever . |
| awesome |
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| Name: kaythee | 2008-09-13 |
this truly is an awesome poem
beautifully well written
i just notice that you do contribute a lot of your poems to this site and all of them are amazingly good
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JJJJ,I don't see you trying to write a poem, so perhaps the next time you're planning to make a critic on someone else's poem, at least think before you say something like that and fix your grammar up too.
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| woooooooooooooooooooow |
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| Name: manahel | 2008-10-03 |
this poem is perfect i wish i can ryt like this
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow from ma heart .. keep it up ;) gr8 job !!!! i love it . |
| very nice |
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| Name: raj | 2009-01-01 |
| very nice n beautiful |
| portrays the craving for love |
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| Name: akanksha chauhan | 2009-03-13 |
the poem depicts the pasion of love it tells us a lot about the power of love..love is that which make u lose ur senses u are completely mesmerized by its charm it infuses that spiritual power in u that makes everything possible in the world.....
poem touches the strings of sensibility.,.. |
| omg this sums it up. |
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| Name: Kathy | 2008-02-26 |
| Gordon I love this poem. it sums up me and mylove who is so far away. soon he and I will be as one. |
| VERY TOUCHING |
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| Name: lonely beloved | 2012-02-16 |
| Very nice ! I too am separated from the man I love and could identify so much with your poem |
| Miss him |
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| Name: lonely heart | 2012-02-21 |
| My love is far away from me and we can't be together. I miss him so much every moment and I really loved this poem. |
| Made me cry... |
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| Name: Joseph | 2011-07-21 |
| omg,i love this poem so much,but it made me cry.i cant be with my fiance,she lives too far away for a drive.i wish i culd be with her every waking moment of the day.this makes me think of our relationship.thanks for making this poem man |
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| Name: Antony | 2011-12-15 |
| This is one of my feelings..... which i only have as my own.... |
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| Name: Veck | 2013-02-20 |
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| Name: Analyn | 2013-02-23 |
| Thanks for that link, and the comments! Poetry is a skill I've never matresed much as I'd love to, and reading it leaves me bewildered as often as inspired.Maybe it's because I use it as a procrastination tool....oh speaking of which by the way...How's the novel coming? |
| well |
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| Name: mvuselelo | 2013-07-16 |
| Nice poem, so smooth & touching! |
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