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I Love You Even Though I Know Comments
Reader Comments |
Darkened ships on a black sea |
Name: Frost Bite | 2005-01-28 |
Nicholas, This is not one of your best poems, but it speaks of our inner pain. I feel as if I can relate, and I shall attempt to join you in expressing this darkest of emotions. Keep loving, and let us jump once more into the breach my friend. |
My Heart Hurts |
Name: Stephanie | 2011-05-06 |
It was beautiful. You mirror my own feelings exactly. I feel that it is only when you are completely in love with someone who doesn't feel the same eay can you truly judge such a piece. |
Good Job |
Name: Sandra | 2011-05-09 |
i rated you a full mark,i don't know if this poem great or not but the only things i know is that it touched my heart because this was what i'm going through a few years ago.. he was my frst love till this day,eventhough he maybe doesn't know it.. he's dating someone else right now so the only things i can do is keep silence and watch him for afar while hoping someday someone else will love me and i love him too.. |
my explanation |
Name: Lee | 2005-04-01 |
Nicholas,
I did not rate this poem very highly and I simply wished to explain why. I can not explain to you what, but it is lacking in a key element. When you find that key to express this void you feel, I believe if you were to add to this poem it has tremendous potential. Keep writing and dont let the criticism bother you.
kaloola@gmail.com |
it was fine |
Name: krazy | 2005-06-23 |
ok you do need to go deeper then this i can almost relate well i can but you need to do better then this it will help if you think more before you write it look deeper inside of you!take care good job though |
Feel the same way |
Name: Veena | 2006-02-08 |
i realy like your poem because it somehow reflects my own life. keep writing and best of luck |
thanks |
Name: eva | 2007-12-17 |
thank you for this it describes how im feeling perfectly |
WOW |
Name: Blah | 2011-02-16 |
A M A Z I N G |
Ended on a sour note |
Name: Geordan | 2010-09-19 |
You lost me at "Galilee." It wasn't bad until I got to that last word.......and then cringed. They can't all be masterpieces, though. Lord, do I know that..... |
Its average |
Name: Ria | 2009-09-05 |
Well i think your poem is goood , sometimes you dont have to use each words to explain how hurt you are , but sometimes people can sure read between the lines. but its good to always love , somday day someone will surely love you the way you did . |
omg |
Name: ceri | 2009-10-23 |
i think it was amazing. i kinda cried a little bit. |
The title says it all |
Name: Diane | 2010-03-19 |
Anyone who knows what this feels like will understand this poem completely. Very well said! |
simple yet true |
Name: Sian | 2008-10-20 |
nice imagery, and expresses what we all feel when experiencing unrequited love. |
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Name: Freak | 2009-03-19 |
I think this is an okay poem, though a bit weepy. More anger? |
love love |
Name: Leanna | 2008-03-03 |
i think this is beautiful. The words and images it creates are great and i absolutely love it! |
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Name: Andri | 2012-02-21 |
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Name: Tatiana | 2012-02-22 |
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I love this poem |
Name: Yvette | 2011-08-08 |
I agree with Stephanie. You mirror my own feelings exactly. I love it and think it is perfect. My favorite lines:
"All day I turn away from life
To gaze upon your face."
That is exactly what I do; it's like an addiction I cannot escape. I try and try, but can't seem to stop. |
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Name: Moayed | 2012-02-23 |
Evie your pmerofrants was grait because you did lots of actions and the sound afecd rely thitid in but next time you need to be a bit faster. |
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Name: refluks | 2012-07-27 |
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touched |
Name: Tshidi | 2012-10-24 |
You are my inspiration, I hope that one day I can write as good as you.....loved every word |
exact feeling |
Name: bhanu | 2013-01-21 |
this is exactly the feeling i m going through now! it really hurts when our love is not reciprocated. only way out is dreaming about him! i long to be in his embrace and hear his voice continuously, but he does not feel for me the way i do. it breaks my heart, don't know what to do? does anybody has an answer? nothing seems to satisfy me. even heaven will be empty without him as he is constantly in my thoughts. can somebody help me? but he treats me only as a friend and sometimes ignores me too. |
exact feeling |
Name: bhanu | 2013-01-21 |
this is exactly the feeling i m going through now! it really hurts when our love is not reciprocated. only way out is dreaming about him! i long to be in his embrace and hear his voice continuously, but he does not feel for me the way i do. it breaks my heart, don't know what to do? does anybody has an answer? nothing seems to satisfy me. even heaven will be empty without him as he is constantly in my thoughts. can somebody help me? but he treats me only as a friend and sometimes ignores me too. |
Beautiful job Monika |
Name: Hou | 2014-05-22 |
Beautiful job Monika!!! I am so thankful that you were able to cartupe my family and me. It is so wonderful to be in some photos for a change as well! My favorites are the ones with sun flare (I know the sun was fleeting that day) and the ones in the leaves and the pensive one of Gavin and, well you get the idea. Thank you so much!!! I am so glad that we are able to meet in person and form this friendship. I can't wait until the next meet up. We had a blast. |
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Name: Stormy | 2016-07-22 |
I was watching it yesterday and I thought I kept seeing Yuto throughout the 2min 45 see1WcR.7;ve grown so used of not seeing much of him that it now takes only 40 seconds to make us think he’s all over the place. XD |
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